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Artist's Comments
Ignore the Ugly Candy mountain (cough i changed the candymountain into a Candycorn as I kept failing on making Candy mountains )
Prize for her twin Characters Fly and Sky 8D She told me to give them somewhat different designs.. so I did.. if they're good enough I let her decide xD I had fun drawing them ... though the sketch is rather old now.... *shot* enjoy people :3 Credits: Art partial design © Fly and Sky © Comments
thank you a bunch :3 It makes me happy to hear that my happy pictures give a freshness to people. ^^
-- *Tessadafox thank you 8D I enjoyed this good Critique and thank you for enjoying my picture 8D
-- *Tessadafox Yay, it's finally done! Let's go to candy mountain! 8DDDDD *shot*
Although the sketch might be a little bit odler, it still looks cute~ I like the slight redesign you did on them. Reversing the colors of her clothes was a pretty good idea. I might use this next time as well. ovo The poses are very dynamic as well... and: I totally dig the way you drew their wings. They look totally stunning! owwwo Thank you so much, looks like waiting payed after all~ <3 -- Life's a maze - noone can make it through without running into a deadend sooner or later |
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Critiques
Your slight change in the characters' design really seems to make them appear a bit more ... connected, in a sense. I'm sure =Amarena-Berry will enjoy this.
The background looks okay; quite simple, really. The candy corn idea made me chuckle a bit when I first saw it. I like it. Interesting. Glowing little ball in the sky, also known as the sun... very good.
You've got a clean and simple lineart, something that is to be appreciated in today's community.
Kudos to you and your masterful use of proportions. They are quite young, am I correct? The hands look magnificent. Sometimes I wonder how you people draw them so well...
The poses accomplish the feel of this piece. Rather carefree and lax, don't you think?
This is yet another masterpiece. I hope to see more in the future.
She did sort of cop out with that candy corn mountain but for the time being it can work. I love the expressions on the characters' faces and to be honest I couldn't be digging this picture any more than I already am. It's a wonderful breath from all the complex and highly detailed work that she normally does and it works composition-wise as well. The sides of the mountain just take you right up to view the characters and that makes it rock out loud.
She did a fairly decent job with the shadows but the thing about light that gets people, even me is that it wraps around round objects and can appear in shadow areas when you aren't careful.
Still, this came out great and I'm happy to say this is a great work. Good job.
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